Something is not right…

(In a frantically pacing, quickly analytical thought process…)

Something is not right…

How can it be so perfect/perfectly bad?

How did it come about with minimal resistance?

Where is the struggle?

Where is the other side?

How did that happen so easily?

Something is not right…

And it goes on?

And it still continues like that?

Where is the exception that I expect to expel an example of an exciting new factor to this extra clean (insert noun here)?

Where is the rough draft?

Where is the revision?

Where is the introduction?

Where is the resolution?

Why is this story one line with no ending?

Why is the one line, “And it happens.”?

Something is not right…

Why is this so boring?

Why is there no dynamics?

Why is it monophonic in mono?

Where is the elements that makes this story’s plot thicken?

Why are there no other elements?

Something is not right…

…but I guess it could be.

It just isn’t right to me how something could be so apparently straight forward and continues to happen that way.

Something is not right…

…but I guess it could be.

Just not to me.


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  1. Thanks for the comment you left on my blog.
    Sometimes life sucks and we can’t comprehend why things happen. Altho as much as we would like answers to everything, in time we will get those answers.
    Keep your heart working towards the good, you can never go wrong. Evil will perish.
    Proverbs 3:5
    “Trust in the Lord with all your heart; do not depend on your own understanding. Seek his will in all you do, and he will direct your paths.”

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